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Appreciation

A gentle day, mild waves roll in on the beach of Belleview Bay. The sun comes and goes away, away... Trees barely moving as I contemplate life, death. I hear swings behind me in the park. Birds circling overhead as if to say, “Welcome to my beach today, today...” Inviting me to take it in. A precarious position. Sloosh, sloosh. A gentle breeze. I feel alive for now, for now... So relaxed here just for a time, to feel existence, something we seldom do. Such a gift for now at least it’s new, it’s new... Johanne R. Deschamps

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/4/2016 10:27:00 PM
Welcome to the soup Johanne, hope you enjoy the community and the encouragement your fellow poets will provide. Best wishes. A good way to meet more people is by entering some of the members contests. It will introduce your work to more people quicker. At any rate, write on...
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Johanne Deschamps
Date: 4/12/2016 6:48:00 AM
Thanks for the warm welcome, Charlie.
Date: 4/4/2016 8:45:00 PM
I loved this poem; makes me feel like going to the beach myself! :) Che p.s. The only problem with that is its like 7 hours drive away!
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Johanne Deschamps
Date: 4/12/2016 6:48:00 AM
I appreciate the feedback Cheryl. Thanks.

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