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"The deepest longing in the human heart is the desire for appreciation."--William James A halo of treetops rings the cyan river, as it trips and rolls down Gaia's branches; a gentle song to set my spirit aquiver, surrounded by autumn's chromatic patches. Parchments dive to play their last days, like journeying across the river Styx; they glimmer in the sun's light-play mimics falling children’s toy bricks. Above, the clouds display their glamour, as Sol peeks through the cottony puffs; Soft trills erupt from the yellowhammer, from a tree limb on the nearby bluff. Appreciative for gifts that nature's given, my spirit echoes His elated song. Just like an ancient English Sylvan, I hear reveling waters sing along. Beyond treetops, spirit flies untethered, a feeling of warm expansion enters my chest. My appreciation cannot be measured, wondering if God and I have somehow coalesced. My heart is full, filled with a peaceful inner glow, and I pause, offering a prayer of thanks. For nature’s gifts upon earth, He doth bestow; with hand over my heart, I float above the riverbanks. While traversing the interminable blue sky, a gentle wind whistles past my ears. I listen carefully, waiting for a reply, And serenity washes over me squelching my fears. Joyful tears stream down my face; appreciation wears the colors of my spirit. I drink in the moment, not wanting to leave this place, grateful being in heaven or almost near it.

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Date: 3/29/2024 4:14:00 AM
Big congratulations to you Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/29/2024 4:21:00 AM
thanks for visiting and for your congratulatory words, Tonye. Grateful for you. Have a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 3/28/2024 11:53:00 PM
Well hello ! You again , I absolutely loved reading this poem , as the sun streams in through the window in the wee hours of the morning, the birds singing outside , I feel as if I'm on that same journey through nature's wonderful landscape of Elysium, where inner peace and only serenity exist. Congratulations on for your win but most importantly for your wonderful creation/s. Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/29/2024 4:23:00 AM
thank you, Daniel, for your enthusiastic response about my poem. I'm glad you took an almost mystical journey with me where peace and serenity lie. Your words touched me, and I'm grateful. Thanks, too, for the congratulatory words. Have a splendid day, hopefully with a dose of peace and serenity, Sara
Date: 3/28/2024 9:39:00 AM
Somehow I missed this excellent poem earlier. It dserves the recognition and winning. My FAVE.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/28/2024 4:49:00 PM
thank you, Jay. Glad you discovered my poem. I appreciate your enthusiastic remarks; humbly grateful for the fave as well. have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 3/28/2024 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Appreciation" is a lovely write with a great picture. We need to say Thank You more....  Have a blessed day.............
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/28/2024 4:48:00 PM
awww, thank you Paula for dropping by and for your congratulatory remarks. Grateful for you...wishing you a blessed evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/27/2024 4:25:00 PM
A beautiful Poem Sara, you captured the essence of appreciation superbly. Just to let you know, Merv wanted to Fave one of my poems last year and he wasn't allowed. It's a funny rule they have. Best wishes from Wen.
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Date: 3/28/2024 4:20:00 AM
Yes its the same with Merv and I sharing the same. He said they told him that he could not Fave his own !! lol.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/27/2024 6:29:00 PM
thanks for visiting, Wendy, and for sharing your similar 'fave' experience. It's just one of those quirky things having to do with Bill and I sharing the same IP address. Wishing you a splendid evening, hugs & blessings, Sara
Date: 3/14/2024 2:40:00 AM
You sing of gratitude with such feeling. Emotionally engaging poem Sara, just a privilege to share in your experience.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/14/2024 6:23:00 PM
your words are insightful and kind...grateful you shared the poem with me. have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 9:32:00 PM
I tried to FAV again ... didn't let me. :-( Beautiful imagery and serene experience traveling with you. Your words were comforting and gentle, Sara. Thanks for sharing your caring poetry with us. Your westside writing bear, Sugar.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/14/2024 5:19:00 AM
sorry we can't fav one another's poems. Boo Hiss! Thanks for your kind and complimentary words, dear hubby. Grrrr
Date: 3/13/2024 5:31:00 PM
"grateful being in heaven or almost near it"- Wow, Sara. What a beautiful poem about Nature, by that flowing river. In my favs!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 5:40:00 PM
awww, thank you for your enthusiastic words and for the fave! I'm humbly grateful. Glad you enjoyed it. hugs, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 5:22:00 PM
Dear Sara, This is a breathtaking journey through nature's beauty, infused with a profound sense of gratitude. Each stanza evokes a sense of wonder and awe. Your words are asking us to cherish the gifts around us. Sara, what a soul-stirring piece that fills the heart with warmth and appreciation for the world we inhabit. - Blessings, Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 5:41:00 PM
thank you for visiting, Daniel, and for sharing your insights and reaction to my poem. I'm grateful you found it soul stirring. You totally 'got' what I was hoping for. Thank you. Have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 4:36:00 PM
so stunning lovely a true nature poem I must fav your write Sara big hugs Shadow
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 5:43:00 PM
awww, thank you Shadow. I'm appreciate your lovely comments and the fave. I'm always grateful for the favs. Glad you're back bringing your lovely spirit into Poetry Soup again, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 4:01:00 PM
Wow this is absolutely a lovely write here many blessings enjoy your day.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 5:43:00 PM
thank you, Yolanda! I appreciate your visit and kind words. May you have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 9:59:00 AM
The gentleness and spirituality of this poem relates to the many rural walks I have enjoyed. I felt a sense of peace.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 5:44:00 PM
thank you, Hilda. Much of the material for this poem came from years of walking and enjoying nature. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 9:40:00 AM
Your command of language is truly exquisite, dear Sara! ... The branches of Gaia, the vibrant patches of autumn. The melodic trills of the yellowhammer resonate from a bough on the adjacent bluff. Your words create a serene and breathtaking panorama. I envision that this shall be the semblance of the emerging world. Dear Sara, your poem is a wondrous testament. Undoubtedly, the splendor of appreciation is an extraordinary boon.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 5:53:00 PM
thank you, dearest Sotto, for your enthusiastic comments and appreciation (no pun intended) for my creation. I'm grateful my words created a serene, breathtaking panorama. I do hope the world emerges into the panoramic view in my poem. I remain hopeful. I believe that emergence is coming. Have a splendid evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 9:13:00 AM
First thought when seeing your image..."What a place to live...privacy from the trees and yet scenic from any vantage point. God's hand in providing us with such heavenly places is to be appreciated. Lovely lines and thoughts in your verses, Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 5:54:00 PM
thanks for stopping by, Lin. I'd like to live there too! Private and scenic--a great place to paint and write. I appreciate your kind words about my poem. Wishing you a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 8:02:00 AM
This is lovely, Sara:)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 5:55:00 PM
thank you Joanna! Appreciate your visit, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 7:31:00 AM
??Acts 17:28 KJVAAE?? [28] for in him we live, and move, and have our being; as certain also of your own poets have said, For we are also his offspring. Thanks for spreading the Love of God, as you are one of God's poets telling of the true treasures within us and around us , when God reveals
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 5:57:00 PM
thank you, Stephan, for your visit and for your uplifting and spiritual comments. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 6:56:00 AM
A delightful read, Sara. Much enjoyed the spectacular images you paint traversing through beauty of nature. Excellent write dwelling in serenity.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 5:58:00 PM
aww, thank you, Vijay, for your lovely comments. They touched me. Have a spectacular evening, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 6:30:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem dear Sara. Appreciation surely is a marvelous blessing. We all too often take people and things for granted these days . Your poem is a wake up call. Its terrific.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 5:59:00 PM
thanks for your visit, Wendy...I agree...we do so easily forget to be appreciative...one of the ideas I'm working on this year. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 6:13:00 AM
You paint a peaceful, beautiful vista with your poetic words. I envision this is what the new world will be like. Tranquility so thick you could cut it with a knife
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 6:00:00 PM
awww, thank you, Tom, for your lovely and positive comments. I appreciate you stopping by...have a spectacular evening, Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 5:44:00 AM
Sara, you have such a lovely way with words! … Gaia's branches… autumn's chromatic patches… Soft trills erupt from the yellowhammer, from a tree limb on the nearby bluff…a poet hears birdsong, God’s loves ones hear its magnification! Bless you!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 6:00:00 PM
aww, thank you, Kim. Your comments were uplifting and a blessing to me. Appreciate you....have a blessed evening, Sara

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