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Apple Picking

APPLE PICKING Plunder of apple trees Zip line whizzing overhead Soak one, wipe and crunch Farmer’s bag is busting As we leave attendant wipes his nose Scribbles on my bag so grateful He doesn’t touch the fussy bunch One teeters as we step into the parking lot Stops Drops Rolls I fantasize a save Tires rolling…rolling And splat Why do I feel remorse When so many other reds greens yellows Lie exposed under trees With dental marks dents disease Kim Rodrigues © 2016

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Date: 12/2/2016 12:02:00 PM
Feeling remorse for an apple, Mrs Kim? How funny is that? I enjoyed your poem:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2016 12:57:00 PM
Thank you! Oh, you know us, poets! LOL
Date: 12/2/2016 9:32:00 AM
My favourite drink is apple cider, I guess that why I like this poem so much! Haha. Ya gotta crush em real good! Great write! 7
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2016 10:01:00 AM
LOL! Rick! I just had hot apple cider at the Christkindlmarket in Chicago - a German festival! It was so good and served in a collector mug.

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