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Apple Pickin' Time

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Apple Pickin' Time

  
   Leaves flutter through the autumn air
        In between the trees the light dapples
   The butterflies have  long gone
        Its time to pick those apples

    Pick one for your sweetheart
     A golden or a delicious red
 And if they are too tart
   Give her a sweet one instead

   After having some apple pie
     Take a stroll neath the autumn sky
  Feel the crisp air on your face
    And listen as autumn winds sigh


    Leaves flutter through the autumn air
 In between the trees the light dapples
    The butterflies have long gone
 Its time to pick those apples
 
      With many varieties to suit your desire
  You can  tell all your friends
           about the red fuji,  granny smith,  and empire
   Cause its apple picking time again

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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Lovely piece,great poet.....Congrats on your win in this contest.....

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 5:45:00 PM
    Congrats on your great winning work..Way to go..Sara

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:10:00 PM
    Good work, Joseph! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Enjoyed this light autumn read Joseph!

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 8:01:00 AM
    Congrats on the contest. Too bad the season didn't last longer.

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 5:22:00 PM
    Joseph , Awesome Apple Pickin' Time Win................ SKAT ~ LOVE ~

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 11:41:00 AM
    A very engaging write with lovely visuals. Very much enjoyed. Congrats on the win :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 11:07:00 AM
    Nicely done. Congratulations, Joseph. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Great write Joseph...got me hungry for some apples now...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 3:50:00 AM
    Congrats on the win , Joseph

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:06:00 AM
    You're very good at depicting this time of year, the autumn... in your other poems, as well. I love your fourth stanza, the "leaves" that "flutter" and the colours that flow throughout the poem Archontoula

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 4:03:00 PM
    You must have been in Washington State recently. They grow the best apples there. Everything here is delightfully descriptive.

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 1:02:00 PM
    I kove apples, I love autumn, nd I love to imgine the colour of this red fuji I 've never seen or even ever heard o! Thanks for the painting you brought to my eyes, dear Joseph! Refreshing! Blessings, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 3:55:00 PM
    I think you did a really good job with this one. I like how you inserted some romance into it. awesome.

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 10:25:00 PM
    Lovely expressions of delight of autumn, Joseph

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 5:35:00 PM
    nice....love it...Skat

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 3:30:00 PM
    Very sweet, no pun intended. I liked and enjoyed this poem; kudos! :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 11:15:00 AM
    - Sounds juicy and good, save an apple to me .... nice poem Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)