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. I slipped off my smile and removed those tight shoes..... alone in my room

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2012 5:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/2/2012 10:52:00 PM

Lovely Carrie. Many congrats for this win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2012 1:22:00 PM

CARRIE, Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's "Single Senryu" contest. ~ :-) xox~ PD

Kash Poet

Date: 10/2/2012 6:47:00 AM

Love this Carrie!Congrats on your win!!

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/1/2012 9:20:00 PM

aw... I feel the relief... Great poem, well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/1/2012 6:05:00 PM

Congratulations on a spectacular win.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/1/2012 4:36:00 PM

Nice piece,Carrie...Congratulations on your win..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2012 2:24:00 PM

ONe of my favorites here! Congrats on the win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/1/2012 1:21:00 PM

Congratulations Carrie, nice one xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2012 6:09:00 AM

Great one for the contest..I hope that you didn't have on those tight shoes though..Sometimes in life we do those things_like wear what is uncomfortable and smile while doing it ..Thanks for stopping by ..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2012 9:22:00 PM

wow, this is AWESOME. So true of people too!!

Kash Poet

Date: 9/20/2012 7:42:00 AM

Good senryu here Carrie!Best wishes for the contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2012 9:50:00 PM

Hi Carrie,, great senryu,,, thank you for sharing your wonderful verse* good night :-) Linda aka~ PD

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/19/2012 3:24:00 PM

so much revealed in so few words! bravo!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/19/2012 9:24:00 AM

What a brilliantly written poem my friend! This is a fabulous write Carrie, I love how you wrote this delightful poem! Sometimes its very easy to slip out of your smile when you are alone, it just happens at times! Very awesome piece, Great Work!!