Aphrodite the Goddess of Love and Room 13

When Aphrodite looked from above, She dispensed another wave of love She sits aloft or so they say And cast her wand over Kefalonia bay A couple travelled to revive their love He pleaded to the goddess above My mind is willing my body weak My thoughts on love a little bleak My queen I love with all my heart I want to give that special part The trouble is on this year 53 Says she’d prefer a cup of tea Please, Aphrodite cast your spell On the queen of my heart, I love so well Upon his knees, Aphrodite had seen And booked them into room 13 Thirteen they said unlucky for some But in room thirteen the deed was done Their love renewed their hearts full they say As they book again for Kefalonia bay Memories made sweet we from them glean As love they made in room thirteen Mandy Tams

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/30/2019 10:01:00 AM

Ha ha, I love it! I think I will make reservations.

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/16/2018 4:21:00 PM

Mandy my love, remember me??? You're as sweet as ever... pleasure reading your little treasure!!! Love, Happy Jack xoxox

John Gondolf

Date: 12/14/2017 8:00:00 AM

Mandy, I enjoyed your little poem on the pleasures of life written in an exceptional way. John

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/16/2017 4:13:00 PM

Mandy: That is so sweet and funny. The rhyming really lends to the story being told. We live in No. 13 on our street and lucky thing I am not overly superstitious. Cheers, SuZ

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/9/2018 7:43:00 AM

Thanks for reading Suzanne I really appreciate it and for the lovely comment xx

John Fleming

Date: 11/14/2017 1:55:00 PM

Very saucy, Mandy Tams...and downright blistering hot at that - Whew!! Loved it! My best regards. :) john P.s I could do with booking in for a couple of nights myself in room 13 - Lol! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/9/2018 7:42:00 AM

hi Ill find you a spot lol and thanks xx

James Swartz

Date: 10/12/2017 6:44:00 PM

This is great! The rhyme and the words and the imagery you use have made this a prefect poem. So wonderful!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 10/13/2017 3:07:00 AM

oh thanks James and I appreciate the visit xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/30/2017 3:18:00 AM

brilliant, you just get better and even better, love the subject matter, your pen excites one again...