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Ant's Running Train

thousands of ants run to their own destination smallest running train discipline with queue concentration to their hole to store future food all are not there too a few watch and inform them King and queen wait for

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2012 6:24:00 AM

Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your outstanding poetry with us BL. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning while I am having a cup of coffee and starting my day with a smile. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/6/2012 7:29:00 AM

Yes, I am inspired by my all sweet friends of this lovely P.S. including you too. Thanks a lot for your wonderful comment. Loved always, bl

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/5/2012 6:42:00 PM

Hiya BL!...this is so extraordinary with its teenie tiny imagination...I feel like the kid in u awakened the kid in me! So creative...dynamite! From this could springboard all sorts of tiny haiku images...keep running with it, girl! (Please let me know if u do continue on this theme...would love to see more of this!!) love, gwendolen

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/6/2012 8:10:00 AM

Dear friend, please read again, I have added. Thanks, always bl

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/6/2012 7:23:00 AM

Yes, I shall try, my friend as you inspired. Thanks for your inspiring comment. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2012 11:59:00 AM

Great thought penned in this one..Thanks for stopping by..Those ants are interesting to watch but not fun to deal with in and around a home especially those fire ants..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/6/2012 7:21:00 AM

Thanks always my friend. Loved always, bl