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Anticipation

held tightly, yet soft loves embrace with bated breaths one awaited kiss

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/12/2010 7:44:00 AM

Nice Haiku, Brandee and thank you for commenting "Days" and congrats...Wishing you a nice weekend...Gert

Margaret Foster

Date: 6/4/2010 1:55:00 AM

Hi Brandee, I like the anticipation in this one. well done....Thank you for stopping by and your kind comments...Margaret

Constance La France

Date: 5/17/2010 6:07:00 PM

Very pretty, best of luck in the contest.. I am sending you a soup mail.. constance

Date: 5/15/2010 4:42:00 PM

So true. Feels like young love to me. Best wishes in the contest. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/15/2010 1:32:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku Brandee and good luck in the new contest.. a great write from the photo ..my entry is "Promessa" Italian for "Promises"...luv.. Linda-Marie..