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no rush to pluck stars from the sky or wear a heavy jeweled crown an honest simple life I try ask forgiveness for my error love more,hurt less so that I can look in my eyes in the mirror Used Poetrysoup's syllable counter Poetry Contest:Tell Me Sponsored by Nette Onclaud 7-5-2016

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Date: 7/12/2016 11:32:00 PM
Sara, Congrats on your awesome win.....SKAT
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Date: 7/11/2016 5:59:00 PM
Good one, Sara! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/9/2016 5:26:00 PM
Wonderful response to the query, Sara. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/11/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thanks Sandra,loved your winning write!
Date: 7/9/2016 4:28:00 PM
Nothing beats the beauty and serenity of a simple life, Sara! Like that you can live and let live! Congratulations on this fine win. // paul
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/11/2016 8:42:00 AM
Loved your poem too Paul,thanks a lot!
Date: 7/9/2016 12:19:00 PM
the appreciation of living in the 'now' and the gracious expressions of the 2nd stanza are impressive, sara.. sweet congrats and thanks for supporting my contest..huggs
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/11/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks for the placement Nette!
Date: 7/7/2016 6:03:00 AM
Very nice. Please check the line " love more, hurt less." It only has 7 syllables. Best of luck!
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/7/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for pointing that out Norma!
Date: 7/5/2016 2:28:00 PM
Good answer Sara, best wishes in the contest...
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/7/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thanks a lot Charlie for stopping by!

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