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Answer Me

Flies past my window As if I am a strangler Is that the new way home? Peers through the window panes Of my innermost contemplation Could that be my ignoble double?

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Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 2/5/2014 5:23:00 AM

There are good flies and bad flies out there just make sure you are the not the ignoble double of the guy on the other side. Good idea I have seen this idea used in watery reflections too.

Jake Ponce

Date: 10/12/2013 11:03:00 PM

For some reason this piece made me feel like I broke up with someone and had to deal with seeing that person pass by every single day. He/She who once were familiar is now a stranger. :)