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Anothers Name

As my sweetheart slept She spoke anothers name. In the dark, I quietly wept How could things stay the same. Perhaps she was only dreaming But it cut me to the core, To hear her speak anothers name My heart, it hit the floor. I dreaded, but longed for her to wake Should I tell her what she said. My heart was close to breaking, As we lay there, on our bed. Entry for 'Talking in your sleep' contest Sponsored by Lewis Raynes. 9/1/2017

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Date: 1/21/2017 11:00:00 PM
Ouch! Congrats on your win Gary!
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/22/2017 3:37:00 PM
Thank you Mark :)
Date: 1/20/2017 9:45:00 AM
Congrats on your win Gary
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 1/19/2017 9:45:00 PM
great poem Gary - congrats on the win!
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 3:21:00 AM
Thank you Claudia :)
Date: 1/19/2017 9:39:00 PM
Oh yes! So much emotion! Congrats, Gary!
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/20/2017 3:20:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 1/9/2017 6:52:00 AM
So well written Gary. Very sad. I can feel the hurt. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 1/9/2017 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :)
Date: 1/9/2017 6:37:00 AM
This was sad Gary but so well written. It hurt my heart to read. Good luck in the contest.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/9/2017 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Chris :)

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