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My birthday joy brings sweet treats of cake and ice cream, loving smiles warm me as well wishes abound. The flames burn brightly as they flutter and twinkle and my happiness shows as I wish a wish on each of them and blow them all out. As one by one they fizzle my life flicks before me, each season but a frame, in this film, I'm the star, but the celluloid images fade into distance, like each grain in an hour glass, moments slip past me and my flame burns out. 03/07/16

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Date: 3/20/2016 11:29:00 PM
What a stunning image you've created with this format ... that in itself is impressive, but the poetic content is also a treat. I haven't checked the contest results, but by reading the comments, it looks like you've won. Congrats are in order!
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Date: 3/15/2016 12:20:00 AM
awesome win James... love LINDA
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James Inman
Date: 3/15/2016 5:37:00 AM
Thank you PD.
Date: 3/12/2016 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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James Inman
Date: 3/12/2016 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Sarita.
Date: 3/11/2016 9:16:00 PM
hey, thanks for seeing one of my poems recently. I need to hurry off and it's killing me. I just want to stay and do my comments! Have a lovely weekend, Ralph.
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Date: 3/9/2016 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win
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James Inman
Date: 3/10/2016 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Samiha.
Date: 3/9/2016 8:42:00 AM
Cleverly executed. Congratulations
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James Inman
Date: 3/9/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thank you Charlie, I appreciate the visit.
Date: 3/9/2016 12:44:00 AM
Wow this is amazingly beautiful James.. congrats on top podium.
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James Inman
Date: 3/9/2016 5:57:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and the nice comment, Dr. Sharma.
Date: 3/8/2016 11:05:00 PM
This is well written. Great imagery. Congrats on your 1st place win:):)
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James Inman
Date: 3/9/2016 5:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jo.
Date: 3/8/2016 4:08:00 PM
WOW< I can see how this got a win in the contest. VEry well deserved my friend. I am proud of you. Congrats, and thanks for seeing many of my poems today. Wish I had more time here. I have five more poets to see and no time left. Grrrr, what to do?what to do?
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James Inman
Date: 3/9/2016 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, I know what you mean, there is never enough time.
Date: 3/8/2016 1:22:00 PM
very clever congrats
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James Inman
Date: 3/9/2016 5:51:00 AM
Thanks Stephen.
Date: 3/8/2016 12:03:00 PM
James, wonderful write and CONGRATULATIONS on first place, a big 7 +
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James Inman
Date: 3/9/2016 5:50:00 AM
Thank you BW, for you're always supportive comments.
Date: 3/8/2016 7:13:00 AM
Amazing how your etheree blends so well with the theme of your poem!!! Congrats for your first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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James Inman
Date: 3/8/2016 11:37:00 AM
Teddy, thanks for the great comment.
Date: 3/7/2016 8:54:00 PM
Wow, this is great! Love the analogy and imagery, a 7 :)
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James Inman
Date: 3/8/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful comment Laura.
Date: 3/7/2016 7:35:00 PM
Congratulations on this win! Display, imagery well done!
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James Inman
Date: 3/8/2016 11:35:00 AM
Thank you for your nice visit Susan.
Date: 3/7/2016 6:50:00 PM
A really great poem, James, with nice imagery through words and layout. Congratulations on your top of the podium win. Sandra
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James Inman
Date: 3/8/2016 11:34:00 AM
Sandra, thank you for your visit and your kind words.
Date: 3/7/2016 2:48:00 PM
James, congratulations on the “What Goes Up, Must Come Down” contest a 7: ) Hugs Eve
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James Inman
Date: 3/8/2016 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 3/7/2016 12:36:00 PM
I don't really celebrate my birthday James just remain 21 again lol many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 3/8/2016 11:32:00 AM
My birthday was a few months ago. I decided to have another one this year in hopes of reaching a more favorable age. It doesn't seem to be working I just seem to be getting older. Thanks Jan.
Date: 3/7/2016 12:29:00 PM
James, congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo *Smiles*
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James Inman
Date: 3/8/2016 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Laura.

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