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Another Wintry Day

It’s too cold, so, I cannot go outside and play Staring at a computer makes my eyes rheumy My muse, apparently, has nothing to say It’s too cold, so I cannot go outside and play, I can hardly wait for another sunshiny day I’m so tired of wintery days, dark and gloomy, It’s too cold, so I cannot go outside and play Staring at a computer makes my eyes rheumy. Written December 8, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/10/2022 4:29:00 AM

I am thrilled that you get to go outside and play tomorrow - and play and play and play! Happy vacation!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/10/2022 8:25:00 AM

Yes! I can hardly wait! The sun is trying its best here today, too.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/8/2022 3:36:00 PM

Hello Milton, Winter is just begging. We have a long way to go before Spring. Also winter never knows when to leave. So it could be a longer winter. Enjoy your evening my friend./ Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/9/2022 10:12:00 AM

Hello Milton, Your welcme. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/8/2022 7:03:00 PM

I think you are right about this, Darlene. Thanks for your read and your comment.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/8/2022 1:59:00 PM

A shame the weather is against you Milton but experts reckon too much screen time doesn't do your eyes much good.. You're caught between the devil and the dark blue sea. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/8/2022 7:04:00 PM

I am, indeed, Tom, but when I'm in my den, and it is too disagreeable to go outside, I'm at the computer. Way too much, I'm afraid. My eyes have trouble adjusting from here to there!