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Another Sunset

orange sky hanging in the horizon... evening breeze golden sun over the sea... sultry smell another day coming to an end... her slow blinking ================ Placement:10th;(Nov. 2011) Contest:Sunset haiku Sponsor: Irma Linda By:kashinath karmakar

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Shannon Deane

Date: 11/14/2011 3:43:00 PM

I'm surprised I never commented on before...but well done and congrats on your win...luv shannon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2011 6:38:00 PM

Congrats Kash on another brilliant win my friend..with super dynamic words of expression which impress .. always luv..

Janette Fisher

Date: 11/8/2011 11:54:00 AM

Many congrats on your contest win - regards Janette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2011 11:28:00 AM

Very, very lovely portrait of sunset, Kash. Love the way you describe the breeze and the smell of the sea. The last line is very creative, giving "personality" to the setting sun. Best wishes in the Sunset contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/8/2011 6:26:00 AM

soft smile..guess it did not hurt to take a second pass at them aye? HUZZAH! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2011 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunset Haiku" contest Kash. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 11/8/2011 1:31:00 AM

kash congrats on your win, great triplet..David

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/8/2011 1:14:00 AM

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/7/2011 10:04:00 PM

KASH~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.