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Another Space In Time

My light has been dimmed. My branches', broken. My leaves fell off, one by one. And with no light, I suffered. The cold bit me in the night. I found comfort, in the darkness. It loved me through my pain. Even though your world kept growing, mine remained the same. My love has never faded for you. It never changed. Your beauty kept me going, kept me strong. I felt like a blade of grass in a country song. Your hair blew with the curling wind while singing a beautiful love song. Your heart was beating closely with mine and I succumbed to rhythm that would beat through time. I am yours and forever, you will be mine. We will love again closely, when you reach my space in time. I was always yours and you were always mine. I leave my kiss upon our sacred time. Remember my love, my faithful vows. I'll always be with you, enjoying your smile.

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Skat A

Date: 5/6/2016 2:05:00 AM

FALONE, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT

Falone Cole

Date: 4/29/2016 3:53:00 PM

You People... I am so humbled at this very moment after reading your beautiful words. Thank you, all.

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2016 11:02:00 AM

Falone, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Falone Cole
Date: 4/29/2016 3:50:00 PM

:-)

Moon Flower

Date: 4/28/2016 9:55:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Falone. :)

Falone Cole
Date: 4/29/2016 3:50:00 PM

:-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2016 11:36:00 AM

Well done, Falone, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Falone Cole
Date: 4/29/2016 3:49:00 PM

Greetings to all! I am excited and honored to be a part of your world; A secret world, that is. I am so humbled by the warm welcoming. I look forward to sharing my deepest thoughts with you! I am also looking forward to reading all of your emotion's as well. Be Blessed!