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Another scary Story

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Another scary Story

You make your move
Up the stairs
a cool breeze
Makes you flare

You shiver
like a duck on a river

You stay still
Stoned for death
White as a ghost
Fleet like a pest

You race
Like a cow flowing on the upper side of space

You make your move
Down the stairs
A cool breeze
Leaves the air

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  1. Date: 9/23/2009 11:41:00 AM
    Thank you for entering my contest Sajdah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/2/2009 3:15:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/27/2009 6:03:00 PM
    nice one =)

  1. Date: 7/24/2009 7:36:00 AM
    A poem like no other ive read in awhile once is a good thing great job love the rhyme keep it up

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 10:35:00 PM
    Def. Scary.... good write- eddie

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 2:53:00 PM
    thanks for your comments about my poem, nice to hear somebody understands them. do like this one.

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 2:50:00 PM
    Sounds scary to me. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 1:54:00 PM
    Awesome! great write, Sajdah! "You race/Like a cow flowing on the upper side of space" ...Holy Cow!! What a simile!! Fantastic. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 1:28:00 PM
    Must agree with Bob, Sajdah. That "cool breeze" is often associated with spiritual apparitions. Very nice write! Love, Carolyn