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Another Scary Story

You make your move Up the stairs a cool breeze Makes you flare You shiver like a duck on a river You stay still Stoned for death White as a ghost Fleet like a pest You race Like a cow flowing on the upper side of space You make your move Down the stairs A cool breeze Leaves the air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/23/2009 11:41:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Sajdah. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2009 3:15:00 PM
Freaky.
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Date: 7/27/2009 6:03:00 PM
nice one =)
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Date: 7/24/2009 7:36:00 AM
A poem like no other ive read in awhile once is a good thing great job love the rhyme keep it up
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Date: 7/23/2009 10:35:00 PM
Def. Scary.... good write- eddie
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:53:00 PM
thanks for your comments about my poem, nice to hear somebody understands them. do like this one.
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Date: 7/18/2009 2:50:00 PM
Sounds scary to me. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 7/18/2009 1:28:00 PM
Must agree with Bob, Sajdah. That "cool breeze" is often associated with spiritual apparitions. Very nice write! Love, Carolyn
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