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Another Point of View

Empathy helps me write poetry, a collection of smiles, tears, and rage. A poet's words can oft forge the keys that free fragile feelings from their cage. When probing for deeper awareness, insensitivity risks my wrath. For it hurts to suffer criticism from those following a dead-end path. Seeking answers to complex questions, I find truth resides in simple words. And my poems are snapshots of life, from the human psyche to wild birds. In the reality of my world, dreams turn to frustration as time slips. But, the memories stored in my heart manage to bring a smile to my lips. Through poems, I hope to open your eyes, exposing my heart and soul to you. And though I speak of things familiar, I offer another point of view. (Quatrain) 5/20/2013

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Date: 2/25/2018 2:57:00 PM
Love your first line : "empathy" is a powerful phonetic word, and delightful rhyme within line. Love the imagery of the keys to the cage. Love the alliteration "free fragile feelings" and the phrase "poems are a snapshot of life". And I also love the personal connection in the last stanza "sharing my heart and soul with you". Lovely poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/25/2018 5:28:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments are all appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/14/2015 3:42:00 PM
Hey Emile, how sweet to share this poem with us. Keep being inspired. I look forward to more from you. Neva
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Date: 6/1/2013 2:01:00 PM
Emile Congratulations, with the poem and thoughts about YOU. LOVE ~SKAT~
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