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The first embrace is with the eye, That sings the soul of love’s sweet song. A simple kiss, the choral sigh, No shortened notes that last too long, As gentle touches softly cry, To wrap the heart in love’s sarong The first embrace is with the eye, That sings the soul of love’s sweet song. Two hands entwine, no question why, This gentle thing that walks among A crazy world that flies on by, As in this love two hearts belong, The first embrace is with the eye, That sings the soul of love’s sweet song. Form: Rondel Prime

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Date: 5/23/2012 2:22:00 AM
Jemmy love it..David
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 5/24/2012 2:40:00 AM
Thank you David
Date: 5/22/2012 6:15:00 PM
the first embrace,nice
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 5/24/2012 2:41:00 AM
Thank you Richard

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