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Another Painful Moment of Love

It stings, like one million bees All finding their mark in one moment Ripping skin to pieces and injecting venom, making it hurt for a long time. It makes you shake Like when you spin around and around for a long time the world underneath you seems unstable when it is you who is more unstable than a spinning top It heals you Like time, like hugs, and like medicine Sure it hurts, sure you sometimes wish your life over But eventually the pain numbs You'll feel better And then you'll move on It's closure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/20/2010 9:41:00 PM
your right ........
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Date: 3/12/2010 6:23:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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