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Waking Slumber Another day One more to sway My eyes are red My hopes are dead I live in dread In bed Another day Another one Another breath of putrid air Why Interludes Softly mocking me Musicale morticians Playing with my mind Oneness Nothingness Meaningless Vodkaness Swimming in tears Arms flaying in past races Symphonies sounding grandiose themes I am one with death and her piano keys I sit as the keys fall to the floor Sadness absorbed by the empty walls I am one With no one No tunes No cartoons Rain and depression strangle my heart Nothing left at all to give Wrinkled Withered Despair in the king’s castle Counting gold One Bloated and floated Black liver dancing in the sea Shouting his oneness Return Come back Touch ne Humanity Oneness

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Matt Mcqueeney

Date: 2/4/2016 5:33:00 PM

Great poem Arthur, this is exactly how I feel right now. Why I haven't been reading or writing poetry. Ha

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/6/2016 1:42:00 AM

I know the feeling well, so I hope the smiles return!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/19/2015 1:55:00 PM

Been there many mornings, and even the beauty of music or poetry brings no comfort... Your creative lines capture that feeling and take it deep into the reader's soul... Excellent work, Arthur!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/3/2015 10:38:00 PM

Thank you Kelly, I hear you!

Anton Smith

Date: 9/17/2015 3:54:00 PM

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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2015 4:17:00 PM

Please stop spamming the site.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2015 2:48:00 PM

Has such a weight of sadness to it. Some interesting images in this one, Arthur.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2015 4:24:00 PM

Sorry for the late answer, please do not charge me a $17.00 penalty for this!

Neva Romaine

Date: 9/10/2015 2:23:00 PM

Hey Arthur, stopped by for a visit. This is a deeply solemn poem. Sometimes a nice, strong drink can help. Very expressive and well written. Be Blessed, Neva

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2015 4:23:00 PM

Thanks Neva, good idea!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/9/2015 4:15:00 PM

this is deep and pensive, ever flowing with snippets of greeat lines, arthur.. enjoyed!.. huggs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2015 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Nette :)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/9/2015 12:13:00 PM

I was riding this with you. Time to hit happy hour. Liver don't fail me now.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2015 4:22:00 PM

LOL thanks Tim

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/9/2015 7:34:00 AM

I guess it was one of those weekends, poets pens think alike and drown in the misery of ink...hugs sugar xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/9/2015 10:55:00 AM

Thank you Cas, so true!

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/8/2015 10:39:00 PM

I seem to recall visiting that place long, long ago. Where darkness births misery and heartache. And cries float on winds of despair and chills of cuts ... Yep, left it behind and never want to go back! Superb write my friend!!! A7

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/9/2015 10:54:00 AM

Thank you Robert

Aurore Severo

Date: 9/8/2015 9:43:00 PM

Forgive to say, this feels so real and painful, sad beauty xoxoxoxoxoxox

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/9/2015 10:54:00 AM

Thank you for your kindness!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/8/2015 12:32:00 AM

Superb write Arthur, we all wait for humanity to arrive, trust it reaches very soon!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/8/2015 1:00:00 AM

Thank you Dr Upma Sharma, I hope as well!!!