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Another Love Poem

I drown in your smile It tastes like golden honey Your scent on the wind Pictures written on a wish The essence of my life.. gone

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Aneysa Churchwell

Date: 6/5/2010 7:16:00 PM

love the poem you shld read my love poems

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/31/2010 3:00:00 AM

The fleeting quality of "sweet" love is well conveyed, dear LNC. Too bad that essence doesn't last. Don't know how I missed this gem earlier, but I can relate to your thoughts, Barbara. Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/30/2010 2:22:00 PM

My congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest, Barbara! This is exquisite..goes to my favs....Peace, love, audrey

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/30/2010 12:56:00 PM

This is so enticing. I just love the flow of the words and the message. You could always catch a falling star. Great job! Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2010 3:23:00 PM

this was so beautiful and well deserved win! andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/28/2010 9:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Tanka Me" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/28/2010 2:19:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your success with this fine verse...well done...Margaret

Date: 5/27/2010 1:33:00 PM

I like the surprising end. Creative perspective. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you many more. Karen