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Another Empty Soul

Sitting there empty hearted With no place to go People putting you down Loving to see you hurt The love and you see Is what you hope you won't have to be Scary nights Living days I have another empty soul Wanna come break it more?

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Breana Wiggins

Date: 12/9/2008 8:52:00 PM

I don't know what to say because I feel they same way. Great write.

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/4/2008 1:21:00 PM

So much emotion in this, this was a really good write, you wrote with your heart. I think a lot of people can relate to this. Hang in there, ~Michaela~

Christy Hardy

Date: 11/20/2008 6:12:00 PM

Sometimes people are so cruel, I know, they like to make you feel uneasy with yourself, and I found out later in life, it was really themselves that had all the hangups. Kinda weird, but as you get older, and really see things for what they are, that is when the truth will come out...always, Christy

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/20/2008 2:52:00 PM

high school is another form of a battle field. you have to dodge the bullets but if you get hit you have to git up and keep running if your not shooting. comprimising between the two sets of rules. sometimes it WWJD other times it hit and run. but the main thing is to stay cool by keeping your mouth shut. then your cool. john

Chris Kane Jr.

Date: 11/19/2008 9:29:00 AM

maybe i shouldnt call you then...maybe its better if i dont

Karl Sparks

Date: 11/19/2008 12:48:00 AM

This one reminds me of my freshman year of highschool....it realy works at putting those fealings into words, i tried to add u on m y s p a c e but u have it set to private