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Another Day

empty rusted swing upon the rain drenched stoop sways in broken light a silhouette of you forever etched in my mind

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Date: 1/13/2017 11:54:00 AM
Interesting imagery! Congrats Rick!
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Date: 1/11/2017 9:59:00 AM
gorgeous imagery, brings to mind my granny in a different setting but the silhouette of her sitting in "her" chair reading her Bible, head down, maybe asleep is clearly provoked by your haiku. Congrats on the win, Rick.
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Date: 1/11/2017 2:52:00 AM
Beautiful win! Congratulations.
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Date: 1/11/2017 2:43:00 AM
A profound tanka. Congratulations on your win, Rick. A 7 & a fav as well.
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Date: 1/10/2017 7:17:00 PM
Great nostalgic imagery, Rick. Congrats on your podium win. Sandra
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Date: 1/10/2017 6:35:00 PM
What a beautiful sad picture you paint in so few words, Rick. Congrats on your win. Agnes
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Date: 1/10/2017 4:57:00 PM
This is a marvelous tanka Rick. Congrats.
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