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Oh, to be a child again, When life was easy, little pain, With Mama and Daddy standing by, My hurts to kiss, my tears to dry. I sang and played in halcyon days, Nor stopped to give a word of praise For a childhood of such pure delight And angel guardians through the night. Mama and Daddy now are gone And others too have traveled on. Each day I face another task And in my prayers I sometimes ask Oh, to be a child again When life was easy, little pain. By Joyce 1/23/10 For Brian's Rondel Contest

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Date: 1/25/2010 8:36:00 AM
Oh....Joyce... Such a heart-wrenching poem. Best wishes in Brian rondel's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/24/2010 12:21:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Joyce.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/23/2010 6:16:00 PM
love this. best wishes....
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Date: 1/23/2010 4:21:00 PM
Oh, no, Joyce. I'm sure you didn't "steal" the line. You're far too original. And the song won Henley in Grammy so you have tapped into a powerful thought. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2010 3:48:00 PM
Couldn't help but think of Don Henley's song "The End of the Innocense" while reading this Joyce. He even has the line "With Mommy and Daddy standing by." I, too, long for the days when life seemed so much easier. This is an outstanding poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:10:00 PM
hahaha noble noun winners! Fun title! this is a nice one. Love that phrase Halcyon days. The older we get, the more often we compose these types of nostalgia poems I think! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/23/2010 1:57:00 PM
This is wonderful Joyce. I am sure it will do well in Brian's contest. I hope it was from your true remembrance of happy childhood. Sounds like you were blessed. Mahalo, Connie
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Date: 1/23/2010 1:56:00 PM
Great write that I could really feel. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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