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Anonymous Valentine

Anonymous Valentine Wand’rest thou in the evening shade where growetj the buds untrimmed. The rose with all its thorns, pales fade, against thy beauty. Far fairer is thy complexion, which bids decline of sun, less alabaster cheeks find a gentle dust of speckles, unkind. Thou art mine eternal Valentine, leased only for a short time, whilst hidden in shadows decline. This braggart’s heart gives way to silent love’s impediments, as ink spills this declaration from quills end, unmarked by its maker. A totter’d weed, of feebled age, besieged unfairly, bows low to societies bequest of duteous stage. A sickle swung before a blind heart could ripen. 02/04/13

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Date: 2/6/2013 4:58:00 PM
Wow! The silent beating steadfast true. What more could a faithful romantic do?
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Date: 2/6/2013 11:40:00 AM
Super! I like this one. It has that poetic feel to it.
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Date: 2/4/2013 11:18:00 PM
gosh, this has such a classic and classy feel to it. Reads like a very romantic valentine anonymous though it may be.
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Date: 2/4/2013 6:03:00 PM
Wow, this is an incredible and wondrous write my friend! You sure have created a masterful poem here Debra! I loved reading this delightful piece, quite the lovely poem, Great Work!!
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