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This poem, text only, is included in my latest Book/eBook ‘Clive’s Uni-Verse – A Cornishman’s take on life’.  ISBN13: 9781800743342 published by Olympia Publishers in Jan 2022.

You could have called it a blind date, The manner in which we first met, But one that was truly desired, Not one made for a stupid bet. A year has now passed since that day, My life then so completely changed, When my future was realigned And not just merely rearranged. With the little sight I had left I really liked what I first saw But my social skills were lacking And my emotions were red-raw. She saw through my anxieties; The pain I had coped with for years, She seemed to sense the imprint left, By many invisible tears. Empathy was her strongest suit, That was obvious right away, Her bright sunny manner ensured, We had an enjoyable day. It’s strange how two can so quickly Be bonded and then become one, And all seeming as natural As the rising of the dawn sun. With the little sight I had left, I really liked what I first saw, And I knew the feeling was mutual, When she nuzzled me with her nose And then offered me her paw …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/26/2022 12:43:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Clive Blake
Date: 3/26/2022 11:23:00 PM
Thank you ~ Clive :)
Date: 9/8/2021 8:10:00 AM
Quite a surprise ending.
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Clive Blake
Date: 9/10/2021 11:08:00 PM
Hi Victor, Glad to hear the ending surprised you, thanks for commenting ~ Clive :)
Date: 9/8/2021 7:17:00 AM
Deep and strong!
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Clive Blake
Date: 9/10/2021 11:06:00 PM
Hi Silpika, Thank you for these comments ~ Clive :)
Date: 9/4/2021 11:56:00 AM
Hello Clive Blake, you had me going thinking something else. i do lie the ending of this poem. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/5/2021 10:51:00 AM
Hello Blake, yes the poem di d start in the wrong footing. I enjoyed this poem. I will you enjoy your day to. Clive my friend. enjoy your day. Darlene
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Clive Blake
Date: 9/4/2021 10:26:00 PM
Hi Darlene, great to hear that the start of the poem succeeded in wrong footing you, and that you liked the ending. Thanks also for taking the time to comment. You enjoy your day also, my friend ~ Clive :)

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