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Annabel

Alone she waits for him Alive or dead she waits Anxious down to her soul As the war ebbs and flows All thoughts of victory Any bright tomorrows Arouse most painful dread August, 2016 For Contest Pleiades

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2016 4:47:00 PM

A sad story in so few words. Congrats on your win Larry:-) hugs Jan xx

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/16/2016 3:39:00 PM

Thank you, Jan

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/13/2016 11:52:00 AM

Larry, congrats on a well written Pleiades! Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings!

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/16/2016 3:39:00 PM

My pleasure, Kim...thanks for the ranking!..Larry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2016 8:07:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Larry - Great, written for Annabell - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/16/2016 3:41:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise..Larry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2016 1:24:00 AM

a little on the Poe Side!! Congrats for your win.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/16/2016 3:40:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea..much appreciated..Larry

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/12/2016 10:01:00 PM

Would expect no less a placement for one more of your epic efforts, congratulations Larry...

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/12/2016 10:10:00 PM

Thanks my friend! You're very kind..Larry

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/12/2016 3:13:00 PM

Nicely done, Larry. A sad story you've delivered in so few words and lines. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/12/2016 4:11:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra