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Do pigs go moo? Do cows go oink? Do chickens go cock a doodle do? Do sheep wear sweaters? Do Alligators know all the letters? Of the alphabet noodles in soup? Do Birds have nests of feathered gold? Do crows get mad, when a penguin is sold? Do Ravens really read Edgars Poetry? Do Little Doctors help baby animals? Do they talk to doctors or do little chatter? Why all these questions surely must matter Do roasters wake up at the setting of the sun? Do pigs have wings, or is that all cow dung? Falling from the sky up high Seagulls must laugh when one of us cries Now if a little one here or way over there I have made you laugh on the silliest of dares Then off we go to the aquarium and zoo Why we are off to visit with Winnie the Pooh!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/3/2017 4:37:00 AM
Edgar's poetry! That fills me with delight! All this word play Arthur, you make me so happy and all smiles.
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Date: 12/12/2016 4:02:00 PM
If you're going to the zoo, zoo ,zoo, let Tim and I come to two too??
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Date: 12/12/2016 12:56:00 PM
ahh, the joy of just shooting the breeze... what a lithesome work, arthur, which brings out the child in you.. huggs
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Date: 12/12/2016 12:49:00 PM
I love this, Arthor. So cheerful and light. Kids would love it too. Only, I have a suggestion: In the 2nd verse, next to last line, change the word, "little", to "they". What do you think? (a 7 for sure)
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Date: 12/12/2016 9:52:00 AM
I saw the title and wondered if this were about communism - boy it couldn't be further from it. ARTHUR - this rocks, it totally delights my inner child and current self, I appreciate the talent and the end product more than I can express. I was enchanted and transported. I don't want to leave ... CayCay
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Date: 12/12/2016 7:21:00 AM
Very creative and so much fun to read Arthur. Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 12/12/2016 2:50:00 AM
ha ha ha great imagination my friend, such a fun write for kids and adults alike!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/12/2016 12:59:00 AM
Well how do you do? Can I come too?
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Date: 12/11/2016 8:57:00 PM
Hi Arthur, Oh my, this is such a fun write. I really enjoyed this write. You' ve struck a chord with my inner child. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/11/2016 8:11:00 PM
haha, i just got done reading abby dr. suess' mr. brown can moo can you, and this seamed a perfect fit to my mood. what a laugh, you must be in a silly zone. hugs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2016 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Cas! Just decided to write a children's poem!

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