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animal antics I will I will, I will get those nuts if I swing upside down maybe I can squeeze through the tube, though looks a bit small maybe if I breath in ......and not sneeze. a container of peanuts hanging here enough to send a squirrel nuts, poked his head in the tube and woe lost his grip and in he fell, oh sucks was the swear word he used my tail is blowing in the breeze, what shall I do my butt is stuck, maybe ....just maybe ...if I sneeze. he gave one almighty sneeze out shot the squirrel, nuts and seed, the birds came down and pecked them up, leaving poor squirrel rather deflated indeed.
penned 8 sept 2016

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Date: 9/23/2016 5:59:00 PM
Great poem, Seren. Squirrels will not give up. Congrats on your placement. Well deserved.
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:29:00 PM
Your Animal Antic Poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara Those squirrels can get the bird seed for sure and then taunt the birds..LOL
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Date: 9/18/2016 9:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Seren, this is so funny. Hugs
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Date: 9/18/2016 4:08:00 PM
My hubby is constantly trying to find ways to outsmart these little guys! Thoroughly enjoyed your poem, Seren, and congrats on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/18/2016 4:00:00 PM
so cute Seren :) Congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/8/2016 8:07:00 AM
We have so many they are a damned nuisance. However they are fun to watch. A very enjoyable story, Seren. Good luck in contest.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/8/2016 12:33:00 PM
Thanks Daniel yes they are fun....Seren
Date: 9/8/2016 1:38:00 AM
Made me smile Seren - we have no squirrels on the Island - used to love seeing them when we lived in the UK:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/8/2016 12:32:00 PM
Hi Jan. Awww you will have to sneak a few over to your island.....Seren

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