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Animal Antics

Found two pretty white spotted deer Grazing blissfully in the woods I approached on tiptoe, so careful But, staring straight at me they stood I walk around this lovely pond Family of geese-mom, pop and goslings Jump right in. Flaunting-looking at me And wait, do I see them smiling? Clinging to my car window rim Here’s the yellow lady butterfly Sorry! It must be singeing your feet I approach close, but it does not fly I am now starting to think These animals, innocent as they look Are charming me to take their pictures And make them famous on Facebook Written on 09/04/2016 Contest:Animal Antics by Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 9/15/2016 4:39:00 PM
Love the ending Sara...nicely penned..
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Date: 9/7/2016 12:42:00 PM
A 7 for this truly delightful poem, Sara! Janice
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/8/2016 2:03:00 PM
Thanks Janice:)
Date: 9/7/2016 9:23:00 AM
Everyone wants a chance at fame...even animals and insects...great funny write Sara...god bless...^WW^
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/8/2016 2:03:00 PM
Thanks Winged,true that!
Date: 9/5/2016 8:45:00 AM
Really cute poem Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/8/2016 2:02:00 PM
Thanks Jan, they are growing smarter each day:)
Date: 9/4/2016 2:16:00 PM
sooo cute Sara!! Shadow will love this! good luck sweet Sara :)-luloo
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/8/2016 2:02:00 PM
Thanks dear Laura:)
Date: 9/4/2016 1:37:00 PM
Really a fun read, Sara. I enjoyed it a lot. You left me smiling:)
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/8/2016 2:01:00 PM
Thanks Daniel:)glad you like it
Date: 9/4/2016 12:38:00 PM
haha, what a cool ending this has, Sara. Love it.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 9/8/2016 2:01:00 PM
Thanks Andrea and this is the truth!

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