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Angry Little Foal

Angry little foal Anger deep seeded in the soul Giving birth to its nasty little foal Kicking and bucking making a fuss Judging everyone no one he trusts I will show you how it is done Ha! Ha! thinks he has won Proudly he gallops and puts on a display Shouting out I am the victor today He laughs and says you cannot win! I will show up again and again You can't stop me I'm too quick Just try Tick- Tick- Tick- Ahh oh I think he’s going to explode?!! Remember I own you and will not let you go Not so fast, you nasty little foal I am the master of this soul Pick up your cross and follow me Because I am the One who will set you free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/15/2014 11:21:00 PM
Decently descriptive write with some appropriate rhyming. The use of a "foal" proves to be a good metaphor.
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Erin Soares-Anselmi
Date: 3/16/2014 11:31:00 PM
Thank you

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