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Angolan Strength

The rim of my Erembe in hand, her quiet pace remains. Today the Angolan sky spills liquid of my breast, while her breath smothers the blank sounds of the tired plains (Colors of snowbird’s crest) woven with the smoke and strain of yesterday. My little Faiza, how were you able to run? She carries the lone gaze of hours dizzily felt four and twenty ago: the shedding, scraping of blood, our village skin melts neath the sun, color of cocoa, scent of smoking gun. Bear not burden or shame upon your desperate frame, my daughter. Her face and a diamond linger I know the worth each brings (Special love and a shiny finger) Such pretty things may bring about a slaughter. Though never the same, Though never together, each possesses a facet of pain. The rim of my Erembe in hand, her quiet pace remains.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/14/2009 9:46:00 AM
Brilliant write on your homeland Michele, with your Erembe headpiece given creedence, well crafted>>James
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Date: 12/21/2008 9:23:00 AM
Michele, Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "Angolan Strength" Very well written I to with daver and Sue would like to know what an "Erembe" is I like that thefirst and last stanzas are the the same it brings the POEM together Health and rosperity in the New Year...HG
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Date: 12/18/2008 4:44:00 PM
Michele - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/16/2008 8:38:00 PM
Dear Michele, Congratulations on your feature of the week. lainie
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Date: 12/15/2008 5:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/15/2008 3:50:00 PM
Congrats on the selection, Michele, but you'll have to let me into your head...What is an Erembe? Please explain the piece to me if you have time. Love, daver
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Date: 12/15/2008 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2008 2:56:00 PM
Interesting poem with much for the reader to think about. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 12/5/2008 9:40:00 AM
I love the rhythm of this write, Michele. The first and last stanza tie it all together but I am not understanding Erembe ... your daughter's name is Faiza, right? So what is Erembe ... this is a beautiful write and I'm so glad you came back in November with more!! Glad you are a part of PoetrySoup and I look forward to reading a lot more of your writing!
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