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Anger

Fists clench like rock-hard boulders A linen shirt bunched at the shoulders Blood boiling in a furious stew As patience was lost, his eyes a'grew. Angry shouting shortly followed Frothing spit being swallowed Jaws firmer than a policeman's baton Why he was so angry, no one could fathom. Infuriation was clear in his face Emotions all over, without regularity or pace Violent punching, slapping and kicks As the woman fell, his brow lay thick. But fury subsided, withering like neglected flowers She lay still, dormant. He'd used up all his power Reality kicked in-- this was all a big mistake! Too bad the blood on her head was clearly not fake.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/5/2014 1:42:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sasha :) - I choose your first well done rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:53:00 PM
Sasha, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/28/2014 11:38:00 AM
WOW, Sasha wow...this blew my top.. anger's not the easiest thing to control..This has a twisty ending.. I like it.. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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