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ANGEL'S TOUCH

ANGEL'S TOUCH Did you ever stop to think, What this angel's touch really mean? Smiling at you at a flower's blush Giving you the time to think and hush When you wanted a melody to hear She sang you a song in joyous tears When you badly needed determination; She is ready to give you inspiration When only a joke could make you smile; She flashed it to you in shortest mile When you wanted a game to play; She partnered with you in gay When only an hour you swore to spend; She wants to be with you until the end When strings of thorns are poured upon you; With arms wide open, she welcomed you She comforted and gave you might All these all she did with heartfelt delight Now, I ask you... Have you ever felt the touch of an angel? ____________________________________________ Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux Contest Name: Beginnings Matter Placed 2nd ©O. E. Guillermo 2:39 am, June 30, 2013 ***my first ever poem @ fifth grade elementary.. :D? I was nervous when I posted but am excited and thrilled to see, how many reads it will get and the comments.. :)

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  1. Date: 3/19/2015 9:40:00 AM
    Who is this angel called Olive? Came calling at nonsense alley? I have never read before??? Alas! I have never lived! Came at referral of Island Queen? Caution, may be dangerous to associate with same:-) I read first poems as a beginning of acquaintance. Me thinks this will be an amazing journey. Your words will be the wind under my steps today. Asanti…john

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/21/2015 2:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Weeee not so dangerous.. :D! thanks much!
    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/21/2015 2:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    weeeeeee.. :) I was told by one person Kim.And am glad I visited your poems.. :) I was so happy reading them.. :) I wish I can have some squeeze of such humor you have.. !
  1. Date: 3/11/2015 9:35:00 PM
    Any elementary school student who can write like this is extraordinary!... Your first poem is a great introduction to the beautiful poetry we would come to enjoy so much. Congrats on the win, Olive!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/21/2015 2:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks much Kelly.. :) I am humbled by your comment.. i so wish to inspire more.. :)! like you do.. :D!
  1. Date: 3/8/2015 12:45:00 PM
    Olive O', Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/10/2015 8:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks much Lolly Linda.. :D!
  1. Date: 3/5/2015 10:21:00 PM
    Olive, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 3/5/2015 4:10:00 PM
    this is such a lovely piece, and seems so fitting for you somehow, showing your sweet soul - congrats on your win :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/10/2015 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks much Charlotte.. :)! God bless you always.. :)!
  1. Date: 3/5/2015 3:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on a lovely win, Olive_eloi!! I'm sure I read this beauty before, but can't remember whether I commented or not. Your first poem on Soup made a hit at the word go!! Since then you have never looked back...well done. Hugs // paul

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/6/2015 7:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you didn't leave.. :) but its okei no worries... :)! thanks much Paul.. :D!
  1. Date: 3/5/2015 12:36:00 AM
    This is a tremendous first write Olive! I have now been touched by an angel... Congrats and hugs

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/6/2015 7:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Mark.. I read yours too wonderful. :)!
  1. Date: 3/4/2015 2:38:00 PM
    You are an angel how has touched so many lives in your work Olive - think this is a perfect write for you first poem:-) Congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/6/2015 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Jan.. :) I am touched by you also.. :)
  1. Date: 11/5/2014 9:07:00 AM
    Yes,your poem. Angelic Olive,Love.......rajat

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/3/2015 2:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Rajat.. :)
  1. Date: 10/13/2014 2:19:00 PM
    I've not felt the touch of an angel, I've sensed one whom knows who they are. Maybe one day I'll touch her, and then I'll know I've touched one. Lovely poetry Olive, James........

    Fraser Avatar James Fraser
    Date: 1/8/2015 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Isn't Halo such a lovely word. I think I've met an Angel, and I feel very soon in my life I shall touch an Angel :)x
    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 10/14/2014 9:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) maybe just maybe.. :) o consider each one who enters in my life angels eso those who have been selflessly with me ..
  1. Date: 8/10/2014 11:22:00 PM
    Yes, I have felt the touch of an angel. her name is Olive and I am blessed every time I read a poem of yours. Thank you, dear !

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 8/13/2014 6:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks much Keith..:)
  1. Date: 6/23/2014 6:11:00 PM
    Hey girl, Wow what wise words from a fifth grade you, and you have kept growing and getting real good, I am glad to read you poetry you are a ray of sunshine on a cloudy day, you brighten up my world girl :) :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 6/24/2014 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Casarah,.. :0 I appreciate your continuous support to me.. :)
  1. Date: 5/28/2014 7:24:00 PM
    haha, you know why I am here... Olive, thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda

  1. Date: 5/27/2014 6:55:00 PM
    Hi Olive, are you going back in time...LOL... I got a notification from this poem... Hugs...Linda

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 5/28/2014 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hahaha yes LInda.. :) thanks really. :)
  1. Date: 4/17/2014 10:45:00 AM
    Wow, unbelievable, that's very very very good!! I said I will read some of your earlier ones, but that's really early!!!! :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 4/17/2014 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) thanks for the great comment Arthur.. :) hahha yes.. :) got a lot at home.. :) since I was in my early years lool.. though am still you though. :P really appreciate it. :) _ olive_eloi :)
  1. Date: 6/23/2013 2:40:00 PM
    Your word flow is quite unique. Some intense questions are presented here. A very, very good ending. You do well with keeping the reader on edge, so to speak. :) Great job!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 5/27/2014 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks much Drake.. :) really appreciate your comment.. :) though this is sososoosoosososo late thank you.. :( GBU and let it be known that you are one of my inspirations since I joined here.. :)
  1. Date: 6/22/2013 11:58:00 AM
    Olive, , "Welcome to the poetry soup. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest -- I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer on this site. Please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Hoping to become a follower and a friend to your poems, and your persona. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 5/27/2014 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much sweet LInda.. :) I realy appreciate your drop by..:) You have been my inspiration then.. :)
  1. Date: 6/21/2013 8:39:00 AM
    I like your poem Olive, great ending question... good luck in the angel contest. , Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 5/27/2014 1:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Skat.. :) really appreciate your welcome.. :) though this maybe late but i really thank you.. :) as like Drake you and LInda has been my first ever inspiration here.. :)