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Angels Looking For Light?

My angel came to see me last night; he entered my bedroom with an empty look upon his face. He sat on the corner of my bed and tried to smooth out the wrinkles of my blanket, then turned to me with a glistening look upon his eyes and an unsaid question playing on his lips. Then out of nowhere he said "Do you know were the light is?” I silently laughed within the private chambers in my head. I cleared my throat while trying to decide what words to use, I thought in silence now looking at a different expression on that flawless face an expression of hurt feelings, as if heard me laugh inside my own thoughts. Then I whispered in a quivering voice "If you don’t know how do you expect me too." He then vanished leaving a confused look upon a Childs face, all I can say now is that I haven’t seen my angel lately....maybe he finally found what he was looking for.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/9/2016 10:26:00 PM
MARIA, you have a great way of expressing yourself through your poems... ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/15/2010 3:15:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Maria. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2010 8:58:00 PM
A fine narrative poem. I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:24:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... hope u enjoy your stay..luv..
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:21:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight...luv.. "Sweetheart" ... Angels are a favorite of mine...
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Date: 4/14/2010 4:11:00 PM
Nice one,
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