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Angelita.

Tonight, the wind will whisper, the trees will sigh, but this lamp i have lit for you, will never be doused. Tonight, the stars will gaze, the rivers will murmur, and the moon will come out of her hiding, but this lamp i have lit for you, will never be extinguished. Tonight, in this fiery blue darkness, my eyes await you. my ears ache for your footfalls. Tonight, in this very lamp i have lit for you, i burn. i burn. i burn in every pore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/26/2010 5:12:00 AM
yeah, everything else cease to exist when waiting for love.it's appearance induces another ache for more and re-ignites the fire but it's failure to respond will result in the desire burning into ashes.sweet and romantic
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Date: 12/23/2009 1:20:00 AM
Personification!!! Well done kk, Well written.
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals KK. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:11:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, KK! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:23:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:32:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week, Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/9/2009 2:46:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week K K. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:13:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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Date: 12/6/2009 2:02:00 PM
Beautiful writing here K K ... congratulations on having your work featured this week at the Soup!
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Date: 5/24/2009 10:54:00 PM
romantic,passionate and deep,we take long to hear a poem of yours but then its always extraordinary beautful,and thanks my friend you and frank anatacio where the first two poets to support me here at the beggining,thanks!--charma
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:33:00 PM
Beautifully romantic, K K. I hope the love you describe continues to "burn in every pore." Love, Carolyn
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