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In a tranquil trance, admiring elegant swans, flowing along stately streams, I rested my wearied head, upon her soothing bosoms. Her subtle fingers pacified melancholic tones within the chambers of my misplaced mind. Warmth of her ethereal embrace together with the early Spring sun, dissolved the protective glacier, shielding my dormant somber soul. Under serene sapphire skies, her eyes like unique emeralds - sparkled, charming each beat of my heart to murmur. As we reminisced about childhood memories, an isolated tear escaped from my eye, innocently immersing her silken skin. Captivated by her angelic aroma, I pondered if she was an angel, cradling me within a citadel in heaven. As twilight ignited merigold radiance through silver violet clouds, her succulent lips whispered sweet musings as they caressed mine. The taste from her last sensual kiss, still lingered as she ascended to the heavens, as I pleaded; "Take me with you." To which she replied; "It's not your time." Simple Musing Silent One 22 March 2018

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Date: 3/30/2018 9:54:00 AM
Hello Silent, Belated congratulations here on POTD!! Beautiful and inspiring imagery. Loving with both the heart and the soul is where it is. Most certainly so. Brilliant Work!! Best Easter Wishes, Gary
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Date: 3/28/2018 3:00:00 PM
Beautiful imagery again, Silent One. Heavenly!
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Date: 3/27/2018 2:49:00 AM
Simply great. Sometimes it is not our time. Kai
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:19:00 AM
Excellent. Romance is your great subject and you always write beautifully. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/25/2018 9:57:00 PM
Sweet angels here abide... Great write Silent;-)
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Date: 3/25/2018 6:41:00 PM
I always smile when you write a “simple musing”, Silent, when to me your poem is always so deep, with many layered meanings! Written with superb elegance and sophistication! :)
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Date: 3/25/2018 12:54:00 PM
Nice poem about an angel. Keep it up! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/25/2018 10:32:00 AM
Romance is your specialty SO, as shown in your latest effort, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 3/24/2018 5:18:00 PM
Lovely and romantic, but not soppy. The title was too tempting not to stop to read. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/24/2018 2:41:00 PM
I agree w/Eileen ... you are a master of romance poetry, SO. The joy and the sadness is felt right to the verse. A beautiful poem, even more so because of the sorrowful parting. Love and joy always.
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Date: 3/24/2018 7:08:00 AM
You do romance well, SO. This testifies to that.
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Date: 3/23/2018 5:37:00 PM
WoW! What a romantic masterpiece. I could feel the "longing and desire" in each line. Good content and imagery. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/23/2018 4:40:00 PM
This is such a beautiful poem, SO. My interpretation was similar to Cheryl's, but it can go many ways. Heartfelt congratulations on your Poem of the Day honor! Sandra
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Date: 3/23/2018 2:26:00 PM
Beautifully written SO, and with an ending that leaves so many interpretations to be explored. Congrats on POTD
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 2:29:00 PM
Yes John, that was what I wanted to create... I have enjoyed how people have interpreted this poem, especially Cheryl Hoffman... Thanks for the visit..
Date: 3/23/2018 1:50:00 PM
Silent One, an absolutely beautiful poem expressed sensuously in a dreamy and serene atmosphere.. Intriguing and captivating, I willingly lost myself in the lovely dreamscape you so artfully created.. and I adore the ending. A brilliant write! Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honors. Enjoy the accolades my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/23/2018 4:03:00 PM
Oh yes, your 'Day I became a Poet' hasn't gone unnoticed, that's for sure.. It'll be a pleasure to read it now that the weekend and free time is here for me to enjoy some quality time on PS and with your poetry..
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Susan, that was the feeling I wanted to create in the poem.. I think you might like my poem day I became a poet.. Hope you have time to read it..
Date: 3/23/2018 12:47:00 PM
Back to congrats!!! my Silent Friend...the Angels are with you...stay in the light...^WW^
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 1:59:00 PM
Thank you WW..
Date: 3/23/2018 10:56:00 AM
She was an angel allright! No human could stir such a write. Congratulations!
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Sunlite..
Date: 3/23/2018 9:03:00 AM
Great write Silent.. Congrats on POTD
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Joseph..
Date: 3/23/2018 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations! Gorgeous piece my friend. xomo!
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Mo..
Date: 3/23/2018 7:07:00 AM
Returning with congrats on poem of the day Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 7:15:00 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 3/23/2018 6:50:00 AM
Wonderful poem SO. Perfectly penned. Congratulations on POTD!
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 3/23/2018 6:47:00 AM
- A deeply sensitive poem, S.O. - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 7:13:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 3/23/2018 6:33:00 AM
Congrats on your potd... hugs :)
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 6:35:00 AM
Thank you Kina..
Date: 3/23/2018 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD S.O. this is an amazing piece of poetry, evoked so many emotions while reading, exceptional a fave for me. :))
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 6:35:00 AM
Thank you Roy..
Date: 3/23/2018 5:12:00 AM
What a beautiful, sensual, romantic piece, SO, congrats on POTD. John
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2018 6:36:00 AM
Thank you John,..
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