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Angel On the Shore

Smothered heart, Eyes colored by tears, Angel gazed into them, " Fly with me" he said. " No, drown with me." she said and escaped.

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Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 2/4/2018 5:17:00 AM

Such a beautiful words... it seems you are describing angels of death who want to take your soul with him....something like that......

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2016 1:30:00 PM

Madonna, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Madonna Agaiby
Date: 9/21/2016 2:00:00 AM

Hello Linda! :)) I really enjoy everything here, it feels like home, i was supposed to be here since a lot! Your poems are beautiful, great and i loved them all! and it's my pleasure to be here with you and all the great poets! I don't think i have any super skills, i just write, because my soul always screams; write little girl, write! I'm glad to know you Linda! :))

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2016 9:29:00 PM

Madonna, Georgie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Madonna Agaiby
Date: 9/20/2016 2:20:00 AM

Hello Skat :) ?? Thank you so much for your beautiful and warm welcoming! it would be a pleasure to be my great friend here and everywhere! it's an honor to be with all of you here ?? I'm 18 years old poet from Egypt, i'm possessed with writing since first time i learned how to write :) i'm also Artist and musician. I'm really glad to be her????

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 9/19/2016 3:27:00 PM

Your poem is full of both ache and beauty. The sadness hits hard. You are obviously a sensitive soul, as many of us are. You have fit so much into five short lines. I like the ambiguity of the last word... escaped... haunting.... I hope you post more, Madonna. Welcome to Soup.

Madonna Agaiby
Date: 9/20/2016 2:21:00 AM

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment????