Angel Kisses

Snowflakes so silently fall Like Angel kisses Winters breath upon my face Their departure traced

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Audrey Haick

Date: 2/2/2011 3:16:00 PM

Simply beautiful, Sharon! For my favs list. Love, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2011 8:57:00 AM

Expressive Angel Kisses Shar.. such delicate lines in such lovely sequence my friend.. if only Winter were so gentle as your amazing words ..luv..

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/1/2011 12:46:00 AM

smile -- I love the sweet images evoked from this soft pastels canvas my dear; so very lovely as is, your beauties self i have thus far noticed upon viewing some of your splendours offerings of wonderful art; so much so that i believe i shall fave not only this pretty thought within the picturesque brushed in verse, but also, your gifted self -- very beautiful, painting -- love, christopher

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/31/2011 9:23:00 PM

Just beautiful. 7!

Bridget Prewitt

Date: 1/31/2011 5:16:00 PM

I think it is very creative how you compared snowflakes to angel kisses. I enjoyed this poem!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/31/2011 5:15:00 PM

Please give once over to the form of haiku, Sharon if it is for the contest,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2011 3:36:00 PM

Hi, Shar the fun think about reading haikus on an I~ phones. Is that you don't have to move the screen up and down... and I can comment from here..lol.. Nice and sweet by the way... I know you talk about nature here.. but i have a very silent mark on my lips and most call it an "angel kiss" love it... glad i stoped by to read,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2011 3:26:00 PM

Good one that is very expressive and creative .Enjoyed reading your descriptive work..Sara