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Angel In the Sky

My heart is not brand new, But in one beat I would give it to you It is missing some pieces, Because I ran out of super glue But this sack I keep it in, Has proven faithful to me Not one drop of blood, Has seeped through the seems And any blind man can see, That you are not for me But I am not blind sweetheart, I see you clearly Red hair, freckled face, And the most beautiful blue eyes With each gaze, More of the loneliness inside of me dies, No one ever told me, It would be this way Finding the girl of my dreams, And not knowing what to say To open your heart, and make you see that giving the chance, I would love you faithfully From two different worlds, Both you and i I crawled up through the ground, And you flew down from the sky My heart bleeds, And you heart sings But we are the same you see, I just lost my wings So where ever life takes you, I only hope that you think of me And I will be here in sorrow land, thinking and dreaming of thee So take my heart, For it is all I have to give I will take your smile, and with it I will live a wonderful life having been, kissed by your beautiful blue eyes having been blessed, by an angel in disguise and no one ever told me it would be this way, if I fell in love with an angel someday tormented and confused, with the question why as you spread your wings, and fly back up into the sky my heart is not brand new, but you can take it with you just so long as you never forget, that I will always love you ~ (Alone in the darkness, the blind man sings cutting and stitching, and taping his wings In hopes of one day, flying so high and finding his beautiful, angel in the sky a bit older now, but still lonely inside he cannot remember, the last time he cried then down drops the wings, as he closes his eyes and alone in the darkness, the blind man dies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/26/2012 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Adrain. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2012 3:32:00 AM
Adrian super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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Date: 7/24/2012 10:41:00 AM
ok... thank you all... but what win? where do i see this?
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Date: 7/24/2012 8:26:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/23/2012 5:54:00 PM
congradulations on your win.... jane xoxox
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Date: 7/23/2012 7:14:00 AM
congrats on this lovely write and win .. expressive words in this composition ..luv..
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Date: 7/21/2012 2:58:00 AM
Whoa Adrian-lovely poem. Love the first line and where you said 'take my heart', 'I will take your smile' -Very nice! The last part about the blind man -heartbreaking. Welcome to the Soup!
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Adrian Robles
Date: 7/21/2012 7:45:00 AM
thank u so much...
Date: 7/18/2012 5:16:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Adrian. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2012 2:07:00 PM
thank you so much!
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:37:00 PM
This is absolutely one of the most amazing poems I've read. It completely captured me from start to finish and tugged at my heart strings. Beautifully written. I loved it!
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