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Angel Eyes

Sticthchwort,speedwell,celandine Sprinkled in the dew Jostle in the rain,with feverfew- Cowslips ,delicate as lace Evidence God's grace

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/28/2009 2:12:00 AM

A sweet piece, with neat alliteration and sumptuous imagery... well done Brian! Best wishes, Keith

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/27/2009 11:41:00 PM

Lovely Tanka with great alliteration...Raul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/27/2009 11:55:00 AM

Great piece..I'm going to have to look up some of these plants..I love "jostle in the rain"..my kind of poem.. Bg

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/27/2009 11:20:00 AM

This is so beautiful, Brian. Lovely images in this sweet flowing poem and the title is lovely as well! Thank you for sharing! Love, Robin

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/27/2009 9:44:00 AM

A lovely image painted with your creative words, Brian!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/27/2009 8:04:00 AM

Loved the title as well as the poem! Cowslips, so delicate....how enchanting!:) love this! ~Carrie

P Sheart

Date: 3/27/2009 7:21:00 AM

Hi Brian Beautiful images. Love the 3rd one! Great ending too. Take care hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia Oh, thanks for your most welcome comments on my latest lyric. Very much apprciated as always.

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/27/2009 6:06:00 AM

This is a lovely write flowing right off the page. It reminds me of the warmth of Spring. They are predicting around ten inches of snow where I live between tonight and tomorrow, so I appreciate the warmth. Great imagery. Smiles from Lolita

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/27/2009 5:27:00 AM

wonderful ability to let our minds wander nature, nice, Brian! Jim

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/27/2009 5:09:00 AM

Ah yes, such beauty last line must be true! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/27/2009 4:39:00 AM

I love the last two lines to this write Brian...lace and God's grace..sometimes a reminder is very good. Thanks for the well thoughout write.

John Rhinem

Date: 3/27/2009 1:28:00 AM

Good Morning Brian! I sincerely hope that you are doing well this morning my far away freind!? I love the title of this write very much! But even more so I love your faith~along with the brilliance of your talented and amazing words sometimes! You are a bright light from a distant land~wherein much of my anchestry today dwells! Can you not tell by my name? This is a very excellent write-filled with the brighest Light!:) My love to you and your loves always, John!:)