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Angel Devine

( ANGEL DEVINE ) Though star-blazed skies my mind contained, the solitude of night my heart concealed. Love's emotions were so fully restrained, thus did I hide behind a self-made shield. And then you entered into my life, bewildering feelings, dazed and confused. But you continued deeper like a knife, until my hardness was thus subdued. What I never thought possible for me, you've done and that I'll always treasure. My heart burns fervent with love for thee, Oor souls delight in each beyond all measure. And as you now place your sweet lips on mine, I know for certain I'm enraptured with an angel divine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/9/2014 5:38:00 AM
- What a beautiful poem, Jasmine ..... really beautiful !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/9/2014 8:21:00 AM
thanks Anne I appreciate it. thanks for checking out my poem
Date: 11/8/2014 11:50:00 PM
a dream come true in your angel divine!! Hey, this is a sonnet! I see you calling it rhyme, but you can show it as sonnet and you will be right!!
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/9/2014 1:01:00 AM
Thank You Andrea. how can you tell the differences in the poems. Ive wrote for years but never could figure out the differneces

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