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The clouds drifting across the sky. They paint themselves upon my mind. If only among them I could fly. Each one so delicately designed. If I was there would Angels I find? Written for Barbara Gorelick's Cloud contest. By: Richard Lamoureux August 14th, 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 8:58:00 AM

Hi Richard, the poem is lovely... congrats..Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2013 11:57:00 AM

Ahhh!! Great poetic quality work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/27/2013 6:42:00 PM

interesting question Richard. Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 7:50:00 PM

Thanks Danesh

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2013 8:56:00 AM

This poem whisks me away with such serenity ! Loved it! Congratulations, Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 11:40:00 AM

Thanks Carrie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/27/2013 12:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your place on the winners list Richard xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 8:08:00 AM

Thanks Mandy

Skat A

Date: 8/26/2013 8:28:00 PM

well done Richard... ~Love ~~SKAT

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 8:08:00 AM

Thanks SKAT

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/26/2013 8:20:00 PM

Congrats Richard..another wonderful write from you..thanks for entering my contest. BG

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/27/2013 8:11:00 AM

Thanks Barbara, I appreciate you picking my poem.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/21/2013 3:21:00 PM

Angels, yes, they are all around....In the clouds, on the ground and in the heart! Lovely write!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/21/2013 3:23:00 PM

Thanks Eileen

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/17/2013 7:13:00 AM

Fantastic. And yes you will find angels.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2013 7:36:00 AM

It is good to have confirmation *lol*

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/15/2013 4:50:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Tfs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2013 6:33:00 AM

Thanks Ravi, nice to see a new face

Chris Boskovski

Date: 8/14/2013 11:42:00 PM

Very well written quintain!!! I always had that dream of flying high in the skies, and what mysteries held up above!!! very good poem!!! :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2013 6:35:00 AM

I sometimes have flying dreams as well, more when I was a kid. Thanks for commenting.

Donna Jones

Date: 8/14/2013 7:11:00 PM

Painting themselves upon the mind....awesome Richard...good luck....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2013 8:10:00 PM

Thanks Donna, have a good night.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2013 2:30:00 PM

a beauty, my friend. It's so nice to be able to work on such simple yet eloquent contest themes.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2013 8:03:00 PM

I wasn't sure what I was going to do and then voila it popped into my head.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2013 1:48:00 PM

-- Perfect for the contest, Richard! -Good Luck! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2013 8:04:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/14/2013 12:19:00 PM

I wonder Richard, nice thought, nice quintain xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2013 8:05:00 PM

What a great picture, is that you Mandy? If so you were a little angel.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/14/2013 12:18:00 PM

Your words are a true balm for the soul., rich....wonderful!..:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2013 8:05:00 PM

Thanks Nette, that is so sweet.

Red Fiery

Date: 8/14/2013 8:58:00 AM

Great entry ! I liked it , it is short but very powerful. All the best ! I won't be surprised if u win this contest . Cheers !

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2013 8:06:00 PM

Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/14/2013 7:44:00 AM

Fix "accross", 1st line. :) Nonetheless, this was very poignant & resounding in its message. "And if God wanted the angels to walk like us, He would not have given them wings. But, if He didn't wish our flight, why did he give us dreams?"

Poet Tacito
Date: 8/14/2013 11:19:00 AM

No worries, Richard. Becca, no I didn't. I wish I had.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/14/2013 8:13:00 AM

Thanks Drake I missed that one.