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Angel At First Sight

the wind blows your hair as the air in the sky passes by, i feel lifted off my feet. i am like a feather tossed in air my life feels embraced by your presents i feel no despair. your more then just an image of a beautiful soul. your a star that i see, the one in my dreams. i feel the light shine in my heart, healing the pain within broken pieces. as i feel your hand right away i could tell that you were my sweet angel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/29/2010 10:56:00 AM
Very Beautiful Devon :)
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Date: 3/24/2010 10:56:00 AM
Wow, this is beautiful (: and the form is amazing. Keep writing, im interested to see what other things you can spin into shape with your words. xo .:Rain:.
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Date: 3/24/2010 9:16:00 AM
How nice! good job!!! Keep writing!!! I can't wait to read more!!! And welcome to poetry soup!!! -Courtney-
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Date: 3/18/2010 1:05:00 PM
Welcome. I loved this poem. You told me you were bad at poetry. Looks like you lied. You are a talented person. Keep it up.=D Much Respect, Anna
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Date: 3/15/2010 5:14:00 PM
this looks like a shape poem to me, and very interesting.
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Date: 3/14/2010 9:15:00 PM
Hey Devon. You're too hard on yourself. This is excellent - well written unusual style. Very good. Keep 'em comin'! - Ralph Welcome to Soup.
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Date: 3/14/2010 8:07:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight.. a nice setup for your form..enjoyed very much ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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