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Angel in your eyes

 She left without saying goodbye
I really never found out why
I didn't know she'd leave so soon
It took me completely  by surprise 
On that cloudy  autumn afternoon

I remember when  I first held hands
 with this girl from a distant land
How my heart she touched 
To me she meant so much

And as the years flew by
I always wondered what might have been
Of this pretty girl with the girlish grin
Who went away  like leaves 'neath autumn's sky
But she will always be an angel in my eyes
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 Joseph May




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  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:38:00 AM
    ya she will. congrats on your placement in the contest.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 4:21:00 AM
    good write of cherished thoughts well done RobertCD

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 2:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win, Joseph

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:35:00 PM
    Beautiful, heartfelt write, Joseph! Big congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:16:00 PM
    the reader can feel the emotions of the heart in this piece....lovely write, congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 6:36:00 PM
    The emotion was very strong in this verse! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 5:08:00 PM
    She must have been an angel to have touched you so deeply. Big congrats Joe! Hugs

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 11/11/2013 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    She was...thank you Cecillia
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 3:24:00 PM
    I hope this one won in the contest, Joseph. I have not gone through the winner list yet but it sure deserved a spot!

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/22/2013 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Andrea....the contest is still open...
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:46:00 PM
    this is sweet and romantic. You chose a form similar to mine, when I ever get around to posting it!

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/22/2013 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Andrea...
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 1:32:00 PM
    - So touching and beautiful Joseph! - Wishing you good luck in the contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/22/2013 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Anne
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:29:00 AM
    Such a sweet and romantic write, Joseph! Best wishes in the contest...Love and blessings, Rhonda

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 10/14/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rhonda...hugs