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Angel In Your Eyes

She left without saying goodbye I really never found out why I didn't know she'd leave so soon It took me completely by surprise On that cloudy autumn afternoon I remember when I first held hands with this girl from a distant land How my heart she touched To me she meant so much And as the years flew by I always wondered what might have been Of this pretty girl with the girlish grin Who went away like leaves 'neath autumn's sky But she will always be an angel in my eyes ~~ ------------------------------------------------------------ ~ Joseph May

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/12/2013 9:38:00 AM
ya she will. congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 11/12/2013 4:21:00 AM
good write of cherished thoughts well done RobertCD
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Date: 11/12/2013 2:42:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Joseph
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Date: 11/11/2013 7:35:00 PM
Beautiful, heartfelt write, Joseph! Big congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/11/2013 7:16:00 PM
the reader can feel the emotions of the heart in this piece....lovely write, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/11/2013 6:36:00 PM
The emotion was very strong in this verse! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/11/2013 5:08:00 PM
She must have been an angel to have touched you so deeply. Big congrats Joe! Hugs
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Joseph May
Date: 11/11/2013 6:10:00 PM
She was...thank you Cecillia
Date: 10/21/2013 3:24:00 PM
I hope this one won in the contest, Joseph. I have not gone through the winner list yet but it sure deserved a spot!
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Date: 10/22/2013 9:22:00 AM
thank you Andrea....the contest is still open...
Date: 10/14/2013 11:46:00 PM
this is sweet and romantic. You chose a form similar to mine, when I ever get around to posting it!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/22/2013 9:18:00 AM
thank you Andrea...
Date: 10/14/2013 1:32:00 PM
- So touching and beautiful Joseph! - Wishing you good luck in the contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 10/22/2013 9:17:00 AM
thank you Anne
Date: 10/14/2013 11:29:00 AM
Such a sweet and romantic write, Joseph! Best wishes in the contest...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Joseph May
Date: 10/14/2013 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda...hugs

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