Angel

The bridge coming down “Come this way” John heard him call He ran and it fell John searched everywhere It was shriek wound death and sound Two wings in the air ____________________________________ April 5, 2016 For: Senryu on Angels – Poetry Contest Hosted by : Marvin Celestial

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/30/2016 10:14:00 PM

Excellent write Probir & congrats, again :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/2/2016 12:56:00 PM

- Probir, this is really impressive! - Love this :) - # 7! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/3/2016 11:16:00 AM

Thank you...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/14/2016 11:45:00 AM

Hi Probir, Congratulations on your win in the contest, an excellent write as always....Mike.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 11:51:00 AM

Thanks Vlad...

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/12/2016 9:07:00 PM

Very creative, Probir. Congratulations on your fine win in the "Angels" contest. Sandra

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2016 12:28:00 AM

Thank you Sandra for reading and commenting...

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/12/2016 5:42:00 PM

Congratulations Probir

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2016 8:54:00 PM

Thanks Nayda...

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2016 4:16:00 PM

This is quite different from the ones I have read so far, Probir; it stands out for its uniqueness. Congratulations on a high flying win! ~ Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2016 8:59:00 PM

Thanks for your kind appreciation Paul. A huge chunk of the fly over came down just 30 minutes away from where I live....

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/12/2016 12:07:00 PM

An interesting creative approach, good friend Probir, congratulations on your win...

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2016 9:00:00 PM

Thanks Charlie...

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/12/2016 11:02:00 AM

Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/13/2016 12:29:00 AM

Thanks BL...

Rob Carmack

Date: 4/12/2016 8:51:00 AM

I really like this one Probir. Congrats.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2016 9:09:00 AM

Thank you Rob...

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 4/12/2016 8:41:00 AM

Congratz!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2016 9:10:00 AM

Thank you very much...

Lu Loo

Date: 4/12/2016 8:21:00 AM

Probir...just beautiful..congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2016 9:12:00 AM

You always like my poems. Words are inadequate to thank you...

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 4/12/2016 1:26:00 AM

Unique perspective.....congrats

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2016 1:53:00 AM

Thanks. You may like to read my The Lemon Water...

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2016 1:53:00 AM

Thanks. You may like to read my The Lemon Water...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2016 12:51:00 AM

Probir, Congrats on your "Senryu about Angels." Love LINDA

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2016 1:51:00 AM

Thank you LINDA... Love. . Probir

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2016 5:08:00 PM

Nice seeing this post from you, Probir. I have no idea what Marvin wants from us in this contest. It will be interesting to see which poems he likes!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2016 9:26:00 PM

You are right Andrea. Thanks for stopping by....