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Insightful guidance An ethereal whisper In friend's cheerful voice For Senryu on Angels Poetry Contest Sponsored by Marvin Celestial Second Place 3-29-2016

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Date: 4/14/2016 12:07:00 PM
Hi Nayda, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Angels don't have to have wings. I enjoyed the write. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/14/2016 12:15:00 PM
Thank You Vladislav
Date: 4/12/2016 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nayda. I like your take on the theme...Angels are everywhere, even in a friend. Hugs, Sandra
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/12/2016 9:48:00 PM
Thank you Sandra
Date: 4/12/2016 5:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nayda :)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/12/2016 5:34:00 PM
Thank you Laura
Date: 4/12/2016 4:21:00 PM
A sweet and lovely senryu, Nayda; angels can be found where we least expect them. Congratulations on this deserved win. ~ Regards // paul
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/12/2016 4:30:00 PM
Thank you Paul
Date: 4/12/2016 12:12:00 PM
Certainly deserving of honor, congratulations Nayda....
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/12/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Charlie
Date: 4/12/2016 10:47:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/12/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you BL
Date: 4/12/2016 10:03:00 AM
Yours is a little different....of course beautiful...Congrats....
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/12/2016 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Probir
Date: 4/12/2016 8:44:00 AM
Great job Nayda! Congratz!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/12/2016 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Marvin. An excellent contest.
Date: 4/12/2016 8:22:00 AM
Nayda...just beautiful..congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/12/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Laura
Date: 4/12/2016 2:24:00 AM
I liked your approach with this. Congrats on your win.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/12/2016 5:16:00 AM
Thank you Rob
Date: 4/12/2016 12:52:00 AM
Nayda, Congrats on your "Senryu about Angels." Love LINDA
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/12/2016 5:16:00 AM
Thank you Linda
Date: 3/30/2016 3:05:00 PM
nice, made me smile...for a more precise senryu I would change the last line from In friend's voice to A friend's voice the feeling it evokes is soft and gentle
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M. Kari Barr
Date: 3/30/2016 3:23:00 PM
ha and I did not mean to remove cheerful :P
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/30/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thank you M. Kari
Date: 3/30/2016 11:34:00 AM
- Yes, it is very lovely Nayda ! - Good luck ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/30/2016 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Date: 3/29/2016 6:35:00 PM
Such a wonderful sentiment, read like a gentle hug.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/29/2016 6:51:00 PM
Thank you Dineen
Date: 3/29/2016 5:54:00 PM
Perfect for the contest:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/29/2016 6:51:00 PM
Thank you Jan

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