Angel

I once heard an angel sing She was graceful and danced and showed off her wings Her eyes sparkled like the shooting stars in the midnight of spring She laid her gaze upon me And we had our fling I was a fool to have thunk that she wanted a ring Instead my heart was shot across the sky with a devilish fling But honestly, who would known I'd be left at my thrown As a heartless king

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 9/20/2015 12:43:00 PM

Greetings Shane. You have penned quite a deep piece. Congrats for having your work featured in PS homepage! ;-)

Shane Pillay
Date: 9/20/2015 1:34:00 PM

Thanks Ted, I feel pretty special lol ;D

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/12/2015 1:43:00 PM

- Shane, a sweet and lovely angel poem - I welcome you with your first poems here on P- Soup - Good luck ..... have fun :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Pillay
Date: 9/14/2015 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Anne! You guys are very supportive, love that~

Ettie Christian-Bowling

Date: 9/10/2015 9:59:00 PM

Hello Shane .....WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP!!! I look forward to reading lots more of your work....Anytime stop by and take a look at my work Keep up the amazing work!-Love Ettie

Shane Pillay
Date: 9/10/2015 10:01:00 PM

thank you guys for the welcome party!

Skat A

Date: 9/10/2015 1:06:00 PM

Hi Shane, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Shane Pillay
Date: 9/10/2015 9:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, you'll see more of my work :), can't wait to reads yours as well!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2015 12:24:00 PM

Shane, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Shane Pillay
Date: 9/10/2015 10:01:00 PM

I'll have to follow back! Thank you!