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Angel

There she was wearing nothing but wings I was mesmerized by her beauty Each curve exquisitly bathed in light My eyes went to where hands longed to be I was mesmerized by her beauty An angel displayed before my eyes Each curve exquisitly bathed in light Beyond my best imagination An angel displayed before my eyes Beckoning me with a sultry glance Beyond my best imagination It seemed impossible to resist Beckoning me with a sultry glance Fantasy realized with a kiss It seemed impossible to resist Hunger needed to be satisfied Fantasy realized with a kiss I felt her hands as they touched my back Hunger needed to be satisfied I watched as her wings they disappeared I felt as her hands touched my back Rivers of pleasure coursed through my veins I watched as her wings they disappeared Together we both rolled on the sand Rivers of pleasure coursed through my veins A fallen angel held in my arms Together we both rolled on the sand Beneath a full moon and shining stars A fallen angel held in my arms Each cuve exquisitly bathed in light Beneath a full moon and shining stars There she was naked without her wings SKAT's Angel Contest

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/23/2013 7:06:00 AM

Good morning, Richard. To be honest...I was really hoping this would be on the winners list.... :( Also, I appreciate your comment on mine doing well....It was 8th place.....Enough said! :( Soup Mail.... :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2013 7:19:00 AM

My pleasure, I know when it comes to art people have their own preferences there are certain entries that I know in advance that I will not win but I like the topic and enter any ways. I have a good sense if I wrote a good poem weather it places or not. I personally feel this is a good piece.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/21/2013 4:27:00 PM

Wow.......amazing how you were able to make a poem about an angel, lovely and sensual too.....Well done!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/21/2013 5:37:00 PM

Thanks Carrie

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 6/21/2013 6:27:00 AM

I love this, it swept away all the thirst of my sense of poet :D glad to read this as the first poem of the day, wishing you a wonderful day there Rick :D I'm doing pretty fine here :) just a little bit blank note for writing these days, hug Yanny

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/21/2013 7:14:00 AM

Good morning Yanny my revitalizing burst of sunshine. So nice to have your visit. I am glad all is well with you. Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/20/2013 1:59:00 AM

Richard....may I point out two typos? Just since it is for a contest and all...and it is soooooo pretty! Mesmerize....and beckon...I never get mesmerize right, and it is such a delightful word! :) Hope all is well....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/20/2013 6:44:00 AM

Ha ha I'm still half asleep I see you have already given them.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/20/2013 6:42:00 AM

Sure what are they?

Bernard Colasurdo

Date: 6/20/2013 12:19:00 AM

Hey Rick this is just an exquisite piece. You painted this scene for us so beautifully and intelligently. I wanted to be him haha. Hey I've been taking a break from the Soup thats why I haven't responded to you. Thank you for the gracious comments.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/20/2013 6:43:00 AM

Welcome back Bernard, thanks for commenting.

Colleen Bono

Date: 6/19/2013 1:59:00 PM

Hey,just want to say,SMILE.not feeling so good today.Love Colleen

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/19/2013 10:56:00 PM

Sorry you are not feeling good today.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/19/2013 10:22:00 AM

move over Keats,Baron, and even Shelley, i really do believe your poetry is that good

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/19/2013 10:55:00 PM

What a nice thing to say Harry, you are a bright spot in my day.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/19/2013 9:30:00 AM

I am mesmerized by this, Richard. My favorite line? My eyes went to where hands longed to be.....what a delightful way of wording this is. Great job! Lovely poem. You also mentioned the eyes...reminds me of the song Angel Eyes by Abba! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/19/2013 11:46:00 AM

Checked out the pics! Yes! I can see how this poem came about now! Good one.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/19/2013 9:37:00 AM

I was looking at the pictures that SKAT posted for the contest and this is what came to mind. I'm glad you like it.

Olivia Nimley

Date: 6/19/2013 9:25:00 AM

Great lovely poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/19/2013 9:27:00 AM

Thanks Olivia