Angel

Hello love I saw you there As I was walking through And I really must say You are the form of true beauty As I whisper my prayers to God I whispered for someone like you I see Him there in your eyes If you take that chance on me I would fall to my knees for you We could truly become something As the angels whisper in God's ear I can see my future in your eyes We could be the start of something To last us a lifetime or two No doubt there are many who Want to get next to you I'm also sure you can pick And choose whomever you want You are classic beauty personified Angels were singing as God molded you God colored outside the lines this time Some would say you are the spark That lights up the fires within For God must have sent you to bring The light with you for all the world to see I hear the angels sing as I look into your eyes I could hold you in my heart for a lifetime or two You are a dream coming into my life just for me A tall glass of water on a parched throat you are Can you tell me do you feel as I do ~ can you love me too!

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Ingrid Showalter Swift

Date: 3/28/2014 7:15:00 PM

HI Debbie This one wants an edit : "seen" I don't mean to be a pain just since it stopped me from enjoying the poem,,,,please feel free to tell me if I need an edit..what are we here for if not to catch each other :) unless you were trying to capture a certain voice?

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/29/2014 3:31:00 PM

You don't need an edit :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/29/2014 3:24:00 PM

You don't need an edit , ;)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/28/2013 5:46:00 AM

Passionate work I am reading this morning..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/30/2014 2:06:00 AM

Thank you Sara :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/28/2013 9:53:00 AM

Thank you Sara ;}

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/26/2012 2:26:00 AM

This is such a sweet and romantic poem, Debbie....very nice!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 8/26/2012 2:35:00 AM

Thank you nikko ;}

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/24/2012 1:17:00 PM

Reminds me of a song from the 1950's - I think it was by Johny Msestro - "The Angels Listened In" . Very sweet, romantic sentiments. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/24/2012 2:53:00 PM

Thank you for reading my words Matthew, I'll have to look up that song ,,,, you have a blessed day Matt ;}

Laurel Larison

Date: 7/12/2012 8:03:00 AM

What a wonderful poem. So true angels are with us every day. laurel

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/12/2012 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Laurel,,,, raised catholic,,,,, I so believe in angels,,,, you have a blessed day ;}

John Rhinem

Date: 4/28/2012 3:10:00 PM

Ps. Smile ˜ I love beautiful Angels too sooo, its beauty, became a love song's favourite *

John Rhinem

Date: 4/28/2012 3:04:00 PM

Smile ˜ Yesss, I can, but Your endless beauty, already knows this my beautiful love * Smile, I thought I would steal to make this my own, my dear beautiful Debbie ˜ I couldn't help it, because You Are sooo beautiful ˜ My love, Forever, John!:) ˜

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/4/2012 12:52:00 AM

You communicate your message in simple words that just about anyone here can understand. Just one item needs correction: for good grammar, change your second line to "I saw you there". Everything else appears well enough.